Played 5 minutes of it and am curious... how old is the main character supposed to be? He acts like he is 10 and knows nothing about anything at all lol. Also, what's up with the whole "your parents disappeared and left this big farm for me to take care (and possibly profit of), but I know they are fine because... not telling you." behavior from the uncle? Who in the world would hear that and not have about 300 red flags raised and their phone at hand to call the cops? I like how the characters look but the writing is not convincing at all. No adult would be that brain dead. So far it's a 3/5 for me.
Hello I’m happy for your review, the main character is about 17 years old that shows slightly more. And yes! You’re right it’s a bit dumb, because it grew up with little sociality and little experience, but it’s something I wanted because the character will grow in the game. The missing parents.. the farm and the uncle etc. is still a whole story to discover. In this story I have already planned many things that will have to be discovered but to compose it takes time, and for the story I can not unravel everything immediately otherwise what would be the pleasure? your 3/5 I hope one day will become a 5/5, but it takes me some time. Meanwhile I hope you continue to follow developments :) Have fun
I understand your view but I suggest that you at least try to make the ways he reacts to the events in the story a little more realistic as to make him more relatable to the player. So far I only feel the urge to punch him for being idiotic. I do appreciate that you took the time to reply and that you take criticism politely. I wish you luck with the project and I'll keep following your progress.
The character is 17 years old and apart from being a little provocative, does not have sex with anyone except his first wank! Soon he will grow up and will be over 18 years old. I wanted the character to grow in the game... he just has fantasies about bigger people but I don’t think this is pedopornographic material. At most gerontophile :D
There’s also the uncle who warns SAM and tells him he’s younger than he’s showing! I don’t see anything child pornographic! I start to wonder if you have played with it or if there is a wrong translation!
Of course I've played it, and I'm just trying to help you. It would take so little effort to change the child's age from 17 to 18, but it doesn't sound like you want to listen. From the Department of Justice web page: Section 2256 of Title 18, United States Code, defines child pornography as any visual depiction of sexually explicit conduct involving a minor (someone under 18 years of age). Visual depictions include photographs, videos, digital or computer generated images indistinguishable from an actual minor, and images created, adapted, or modified, but appear to depict an identifiable, actual minor. Undeveloped film, undeveloped videotape, and electronically stored data that can be converted into a visual image of child pornography are also deemed illegal visual depictions under federal law.
the relationship between the characters, some things happen and the first choice! sorry but I also had to do a lot of Setting! so for now just a choice!
no so far I don’t have a Discord. I mean I downloaded it the day before yesterday and I’m understanding how it works! I’m doing this between one Rendering and the other. That unfortunately is also another job almost especially because my English, bad, is a bit of an obstacle :P but don't worry this page is always open on my PC :)
I love RL BL VN and yours seems exactly what I like but sadly can't download the mac file... Itch won't install anything. Any alternative route to the file? :-(
Solved! The download worked on the browser site, just not on the app. :-)
Oh, I was looking for the Mac version, not an Android/iOS one. It did not download on Itch app, but it did on the web. Thank you, anyway! And great intro to characters and the mistery! ;-)
Comunque c'è qualche errore qua e là sia in italiano che in inglese (anche nella descrizione), però sarebbe meglio se mi mandassi un indirizzo email dove segnalarteli.
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Played 5 minutes of it and am curious... how old is the main character supposed to be? He acts like he is 10 and knows nothing about anything at all lol.
Also, what's up with the whole "your parents disappeared and left this big farm for me to take care (and possibly profit of), but I know they are fine because... not telling you." behavior from the uncle? Who in the world would hear that and not have about 300 red flags raised and their phone at hand to call the cops?
I like how the characters look but the writing is not convincing at all. No adult would be that brain dead. So far it's a 3/5 for me.
Hello I’m happy for your review, the main character is about 17 years old that shows slightly more. And yes! You’re right it’s a bit dumb, because it grew up with little sociality and little experience, but it’s something I wanted because the character will grow in the game. The missing parents.. the farm and the uncle etc. is still a whole story to discover. In this story I have already planned many things that will have to be discovered but to compose it takes time, and for the story I can not unravel everything immediately otherwise what would be the pleasure? your 3/5 I hope one day will become a 5/5, but it takes me some time. Meanwhile I hope you continue to follow developments :) Have fun
I understand your view but I suggest that you at least try to make the ways he reacts to the events in the story a little more realistic as to make him more relatable to the player. So far I only feel the urge to punch him for being idiotic.
I do appreciate that you took the time to reply and that you take criticism politely. I wish you luck with the project and I'll keep following your progress.
You might want to consider making the main character 18 years old, otherwise this could be considered child pornography and illegal in some countries.
The character is 17 years old and apart from being a little provocative, does not have sex with anyone except his first wank! Soon he will grow up and will be over 18 years old.
I wanted the character to grow in the game... he just has fantasies about bigger people but I don’t think this is pedopornographic material. At most gerontophile :D
There’s also the uncle who warns SAM and tells him he’s younger than he’s showing!
I don’t see anything child pornographic! I start to wonder if you have played with it or if there is a wrong translation!
Of course I've played it, and I'm just trying to help you. It would take so little effort to change the child's age from 17 to 18, but it doesn't sound like you want to listen. From the Department of Justice web page:
Section 2256 of Title 18, United States Code, defines child pornography as any visual depiction of sexually explicit conduct involving a minor (someone under 18 years of age). Visual depictions include photographs, videos, digital or computer generated images indistinguishable from an actual minor, and images created, adapted, or modified, but appear to depict an identifiable, actual minor. Undeveloped film, undeveloped videotape, and electronically stored data that can be converted into a visual image of child pornography are also deemed illegal visual depictions under federal law.
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the relationship between the characters, some things happen and the first choice! sorry but I also had to do a lot of Setting! so for now just a choice!
Very interesting. I hope to see soon Unc Rey fucked hard ;)
Wow, no one had a problem! Windows T-T? how can I help you? What was written in Details for Nerds?
seems more a download problem than installation. try to re-download it
no so far I don’t have a Discord. I mean I downloaded it the day before yesterday and I’m understanding how it works! I’m doing this between one Rendering and the other. That unfortunately is also another job almost especially because my English, bad, is a bit of an obstacle :P but don't worry this page is always open on my PC :)
I love RL BL VN and yours seems exactly what I like but sadly can't download the mac file... Itch won't install anything. Any alternative route to the file? :-(
Solved! The download worked on the browser site, just not on the app. :-)
yes I have not yet made the mobile version... because there are different settings for Menu etc. but I will provide soon :D
Oh, I was looking for the Mac version, not an Android/iOS one. It did not download on Itch app, but it did on the web. Thank you, anyway! And great intro to characters and the mistery! ;-)
ok perfect I’m happy... and thanks for the positive feedback :D ;
I love it! The story's just begun so there's not much to it yet but visually it's stunning. Can't wait for the next update. I love Ray!
<3
Nice! Will this guy from the car be romanceable? I like him haha
oh, of course :D
Great game, great introduction to the story, hot as hell, keep going!
There are no choices? haha
still no! : P this is the first version, let’s say it works a bit like introduction
sembra molto interessante, spero ci siano anche qualche bella scena di sculacciate *_*
If you'd like some help with the italian translation, I can help since I'm italian. (obviously for free)
:D veramente sono italiano :D però se trovi qualche errore segnalamelo sia in Italiano che in Inglese i refusi sono un casino :D
"Ultimo ma non meno importante sono madrelingua inglese" veramente hai scritto questo XD, altrimenti non te lo chiedevo ahahah
oh mio dio! lo correggo subito hahah :D hahah <3
Comunque c'è qualche errore qua e là sia in italiano che in inglese (anche nella descrizione), però sarebbe meglio se mi mandassi un indirizzo email dove segnalarteli.
:D Grazie mille :D alfredocagg@yahoo.it
Amazing job i want more!!
Thanks and don’t worry! I’m already at work to continue ;) :D
it's really cute <3
Thanks <3 :D